|Reviews for crucify|
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Great job at description. Nice usage of vocabulary. Keep writing!
Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
I think fp messed up bc your title is repeated twice.
I like the phrases "heart-coloured" and "tangerine victory" because it was unique and interesting. I also love the last line because it was very unexpected.
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