Reviews for Once Upon a Time
Joly86 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Aww.. so sweet..

Love it:)
leavemeialone chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
This is such a cute oneshot. I like seeing a glimpse of them each year. It is so cute from seeing them when they were children, so uncomplicated to their senior year with complications in life. I just really enjoyed it.
elma chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
It was cute. I love this kind of story :) It reminds me of this other one that I read that I loved. It was called "love story" (how original) and started when they were little too... to make this better, I would suggest adding more depth. but as it is, a cute little fic, I really did enjoy it! :D
reindrops chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
I think it's cute.
little.artist chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Wow...this is a really good story. I really liked the way you built up to the kiss and their confessions.I know it's not much coming from someone who has no stories or good advice, but I hope you write more stories like these in the future!
Too Much Info chapter 1 . 11/22/2010

I am so happy! I have nothing big against those stories(they're cute) but I've been looking for something different, you know? Something that could actually happen...

It's so so so not cliche and so so so not corny.

"I'll be straight up with you. I never missed you all these years. You belong in my past; not a part of my screwed up life right now."

That line made this story amazing.

See ya'
ChocoResha chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
It was nice :] Nothing much to say, but yeah, it was nice. Good flow, kept me interested.
x Farii chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
This was just... so believable! Nice (:
not one for sanity chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
that was beautifull!
lol chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
your talent- writing an entire story without once mentioning any characters names...except cousin Lester.
Ngoc1231 chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
It is nice that they both kept the necklaces on. And I'm surprised that his parents let him have the necklaces. Maybe they knew that it would work for their son?

Love the story!

helplessly lovestruck chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
How adorable!
metallicdiamond chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
This was such a cute story, it should get recongition!
HuntressDeLaLune chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
wow, you have a real gift. You're story was full of emotion and a sweet longing. TOTALLY AWESOME all in all.
Myrix chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
This story was.. beautiful. I loved the way you didnt let them miss each other or want to be together or dream about each other when they were first apart! Made me love this even more :) (less cliche)

By the way, thanks for the reveiw! My currant work is The World According to She so you might wanna check that out :)! Now, if you'll excuse me, ill go see the rest of your works :D
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