Reviews for Once Upon a Time |
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![]() ![]() This was such a cute story! It had a bit of everything! Humour, friendship, rite of passage, angst, romance - EVERYTHING...almost - minus the sci-fi and horror (well, 'Slick Guy' seemed pretty gruesome enough...)... Loved every bit of it! ~ SnoQueen |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is too cute hahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was adorable :) I really really liked it. I don't know if you've been told this before, but I think you could so develop this into a long story! Of course, idk if you necessarily want to :p I just felt like I wanted to know so much more about the two main characters -more about their stories, their lives apart. It left me curious. Good work on the dialogue, it was amazing. :D ~SparklingA |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how it didn't go about them drifting apart was something like "omg! if only he was here..." etc. etc. The "you belong in my past" is definitely spot-on. I like it. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really liked this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. Well done. |
![]() ![]() Brilliant! The way they changed from best friends, to being distant, to becoming something more is excellent. It's very convincing; you can really see all of that happening, and the characters are great. The way you've gone through the stages of their life is brilliant. On the whole I love it! Vicky |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! That was cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() my god! this is just too sweet! you had me in tears :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute :) i love how they kept each others' promise - that they kept the necklaces on and everything. super adorable. :D |
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![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg! THAT IS FXING BEAUTIFUL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, I liked that. It was...cute. Not cheesy but sweet. That, my friend is hard to achieve. (Y) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so nice! Beyond nice actually. Great job. I love your one-shots. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() that is so cute:) i lavv it:) great story:) keep writing k? |