Reviews for Once Upon a Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A nice, well written oneshot...cliche but in a good, romantic way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() fantastic story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw so cute _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() short and sweet ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this one-shot is so good that it gives me butterflies in my stomach! I especially love the references to thier past. It's kind of like they've always known each other and always will. Good Job! .jealous |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Insert rabid, male, squeeings here* I absolutely LOVED it! You made it totally believable and totally honest. It is a refreshing break from all the clichés that float around nowadays. ~Lexodus, fellow SKoW author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Better than most |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh...Falling for a guy friend. The best kind of love they have. HE HE. I really liked it. The ending was really good and the necklace idea was creative. I hope to read more of your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwm that's cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is so cute! I love the bestfriend/boyfriend thing! Sucha cute one-shot type thing! The ending was fine! I liked it. -Maggie |
![]() ![]() ![]() really cute ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Review Marathon (link in profile) Aw, that was so cute! I liked how they can both admit that they didn't miss each other at all, but now, "something's different". Redhead Girl and Slick Guy. Hahaha. I sorta feel bad for them, but it's not their fault their crushes were destined for each other. Haha. Anyway, great job! It was really good. And the ending is great |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the ending, but maybe you could make him tease her a bit? Something along the lines of: "Well, I dunno, that kissing thing is still kida gross" Or something. But it's good how it is, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't read a lot of the fics on this site, but this fic's summary caught my attention and, lo and behold, it was very good. Simple and to the point on a lot of things, it successfully and interestingly conveyed the change of friendships through age. It was very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That was just what I needed. ] |