|Reviews for The Art of Love Letters|
| KittenOnTheKeys chapter 3 . 6/17/2011
Really enjoyable read! The plot is really interesting and keeps you reading for sure :)
One correction that stuck out to me is that the dialogue feels a little formal/fake, and it prevents the characters from really coming to life, if you know what I mean. Dialogue is a super tricky thing!
| Allie Chick chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Very interesting! I like your word choice and your style. I'm excited to read more!
| kamwe kukua chapter 25 . 7/24/2010
Hmm...to be honest, a first I wasn't really sure I'd like this story since: a) I'm a die hard romantic and I find it hard to make to through most stories that don't involve romance and b) the language was so...old fashioned. Or well, mature. I'm a teenaged girl, and although I can claim to be pretty dang mature for my age, the language was just too...mature for me, and honestly, I had to use the dictionary once or twice ;) But I'm glad that I decided to continue reading, because the characters were so well constructed and the plot was DEFINITELY intresting, romance or none. I'll admit, I'm glad that Carole did have a secret and a reason for being bitter in the beginning (her abuse), because that kept it real. A lot of young adult writting involves problems that are so stupid and petty, that it makes me sick. Themes like abuse, ect. make it easier to comprehend with the chacter's conflict. And of course there has to be SOME smaller issue, like gossip and bullying, because that does cause some issue in the daily lives of teens. Overall, this story was awesome. The beginning was a little slow, but after the first couple of chapter, I had to keep reading. Great job! :)
| MiidKniight chapter 8 . 5/17/2010
I like this story. It's very interesting watching the different personalities the girls have. I have a feeling people are going to end up getting very hurt, but these things happen.
One of the reasons Carole acts the way she does is because of that man? I'm sure I'll find out soon. I call Carole Caroline. Isn't that odd?
| Sophelia chapter 25 . 12/3/2009
This was so refreshing to read. The writing was clean and the story was fresh and original. I'm glad this was featured on Undiscovered :]
| e.brooks chapter 24 . 11/25/2008
WHY DIDN'T I REVIEW THIS CHAPTER?
I'm terrible lol.
I loved this chapter so much, and I have no clue why! Hahaha.
I just liked it.
M yes that is all my brain can think of right now :P
| e.brooks chapter 25 . 11/25/2008
We! I GOT A MENTION! Hahahaha!
Oh wowsers, it's over!
Hahah. I wasn't expecting that. LOL.
Wonderful ending :D
Wonderful chapter, as always (:
Looking forward to the possbile epilogue :D I'd like to see more of Carole's life.
| SpawnMeister666 chapter 25 . 11/23/2008
I have to confess the last few chapters seemed a little bizarre and didn't seem to fit with the earlier story, but it was all pulled together pretty well in the end. I particularly enjoyed this final chapter, and any future update on what Miranda and Carole get up to would be great.
| Sovios Falchion Romantic chapter 25 . 11/22/2008
Dialogue A (I
| e.brooks chapter 23 . 11/12/2008
*$% &*$**%$# (&$!O*#$ *&$%!$# &($(!$( &&($#%&$#(&!
Can we stab them? :D
THIS ANNOYS ME hahaha.
Awesome chapter, as always!
| SpawnMeister666 chapter 22 . 11/5/2008
It's not the best chapter you've written, but even the best stories have transitional chapters that don't seem to quite fit initially...
Or something like that...
5.30am, so at least I'm reading earlier...
| e.brooks chapter 22 . 11/1/2008
I'm not sure I liked this chapter either, to be honest... LOL.
| SpawnMeister666 chapter 21 . 10/30/2008
A good update. looking forwards to the next installment
| Sovios Falchion Romantic chapter 21 . 10/28/2008
I finally read it all!
This is brilliant. Seriously. You're amazing. You should write for a living. I can't wait to see what comes next.
| e.brooks chapter 21 . 10/26/2008
Geez, Miranda's a loyal one...
Wonderful chaper, as always.