|Reviews for Quiet|
| UntoBlue chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
wow...this is amazing. you remind me of e.e. cummings (one of my favorite poets). good job!
| Peanuts Factory chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
That was beautiful...
No matter who you are, you can make a
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
The break between the first and second stanza just seemed really awkward to me.
I love the ending because it's really interesting and pretty, hearing a violin played in his mind. Nicely done. I also like the punctuation in this piece it helps the flow and is actually correct, which a lot of poets don't do.
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| alicer chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
And he is
beautiful, and he believes, he thinks
that summer is on its way, and he
plays the violin in his mind.
i liked that part. :)
| TaltushMeiMei chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
So this is good. It's got a sort of story to tell, one that intrigues the reader. At the same time, it has a few levels on which it can be understood, depending on how one wants to interpret it. I like the imagery and the way the flow, though obstructed, continues seamlessly. Beautiful as well as very interesting, though somewhat simple. Great job and great poem.
| salvagedstars chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
It's deep, and quite interesting. Keep it up!