Reviews for Dandelions
his crooked grin chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
Beautiful. The way how the poem just breaks off is extremely powerful. The first two stanza's are incredibly unique and powerful. Strong imagery, romantic feel, great flow.

Wonderful piece. (:
Liebe Dance chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
I like this.
AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
The first two stanzas feel extremely different, so some sort of transitionary line could do them some good. However, the second stanza is very rich with imagery and is strong thanks to it. This felt very heartfelt and has plenty of potential; if you could use some of that incredible imagery in the second stanzas into the rest of the poem, it could be better. Overall, this was interesting. Not your best, but still worth a read.
instantramen chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Very pretty and very sweet.

Good job!
D351 chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
Very very sweet. Well-written and cute.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
very good piece.

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
even a dandelion lasts more than us... I think you mean lasts longer

I liked the beginning a lot. It was really sweet and well described. The last two stanzas I didn't like as much.

I’ve loved you before of finding you... There shouldn't be an of there and I still don't get how you love someone you haven't found. Then you say if there is a next life death is the only sure thing... that confused me.

I also felt that the last two lines should have an answer.

Anyhow I still liked it a lot and I liked the whole dandelions things. Well done.
barelyamiable chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Choosing between eternity? How thought-provoking! (: Cute poem. I loved reading it. It's sweet, romantic, and I thought it was amazing.
Vanilla Tea chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
Aww, really romantic and really sweet. My favorite lines were "even a dandelion lasts more than us," it was a good comparison, and the last two. The last two were really, really nice. Great job!
Isca chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
"Now it's my only memory I want to keep" was a good line! :)
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
SWEET. and very romantic! Adding to C2 if you don't mind.

xKristie Mariex
Living Life Free chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
I love this poem! Especially the last three paragraphs. I can relate too. **Favorite!**