Reviews for The New Step
D.Doberman chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Language: 5 (it's so-so. I'm still trying to figure out some things)

Descriptions: 7 (I really enjoyed the first part with Bryan and the last part with Bion-I mean Head Scientist Bion)

Plot: 9 (I'm interested! :D)

Setting: 4 (This is probably the lowest vote you'll get from me for this review. The second section with Freela there was hardly a description. Keep up the good work)

Tilt: As I said in the Plot part of the review: I'm interested! :D