Reviews for Father
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
Interesting piece. I like the rhyming a lot because its not forced at all. I also like the flow of the piece because its good and kinda singsongy, which I like. I also like the random alliteration… that adds a nice extra something.

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aki69 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Usually, I think poetry on Fictionpress is either too weak or too laboured, but this is neither, this is just real, I can tell because I can relate to it.