Reviews for Melancholy Wednesday08
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
I dont like how you punctuate the end, but not the other sentences.

I do like the personification of the wind and the trees because it's interesting and a great way to describe a bad day. I do wish though that the clouds had some personification too, just to make things even.

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