|Reviews for Three and a Half Days|
| bloodyamore chapter 1 . 1/12/2009
This should be a song, it flows like one!
I really like it:)
| Mercyette chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
Review for the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in lookup)
Aww, this is so sweet! I love how you had everything come together in rhymes at the end. Nice touch! I also love how the girl is so committed to him. Hopefully, he'll eventually see what he's missing. Great job there.
I felt that the dialoge could have been handled a bit more delicately, seeing as the rest of the poem follows like that. I think it would help to bring it all together and make it even more beautiful. :)