|Reviews for Two Directions|
| Mercyette chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
Review for the Review Game's Review Marathon. (link in lookup)
Aww, this is a really sad but great poem. I think you managed to capture the opposite feelings pretty well, especially when you brought home the message with your second to last stanza. I really liked that. Great job!
I might suggest that you could solidify the relationship between the girl and mother. You could describe a couple of instances that make her love or feel guilty towards her mother. It would also help with the emotional intensity.
Congrats and a poem well-written!
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
'My love for her is powerful but so is my hate' A very meaningful line right there. We all have times where we can't stand someone but deep down we still love them. This was a great piece. Keep it Up!