Reviews for A Moment in the Rain
Guy1122 chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
This is a really good poem! It's just, wow!

I really like this poem. Every line is soo powerful, and I love the last two lines

"In their last moments they try to glide with the wind

and I, as well, wish the same"

It's really good. Thanks for reading some of my stuff. I wish they were as good as this. Favorite for sure.
Anasa ce Fae chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
This poem is very beautiful and melancholy. Raindrops really do seem to be committing suicide, don't they? However, I usually look for fairies splashing in delight when I look at rain hitting pavement. (Then again, I look for fairies everywhere.)
Isca chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
Lovely imagery!