|Reviews for Just Let Me Be at Peace|
| Imalefty chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
straight from the review marathon! (link in profile)
your first line is written twice... didn't know if you wanted it like that or not.
also, i wasn't sure if "just let me be at peace" is part of the poem... as well as 3/1/2008. i'm assuming it's not... maybe distinguish it?
i liked the stream of consciousness effect of your poem... how it goes in one long poem without stanzas. i felt that it worked well.
i didn't understand... "don't be kitty anymore. / be anthony." - i thought those lines were confusing...