Again, another story that doesn't make me want to hurt you lol. And vamps this time, can't tell you how happy it makes me to read about actual vampires for once and this felt very "Underworld"ish to me which is good. As for the werewolf chick, I REALLY want to know who she is now. She's died not only in the fic, but also the first one I read so she has to be special in some way. I'm not gonna call any plot holes this time since you explained in your author's note that you have a plan and I'm looking forward to how made all of this come together. Also, war between werewolves and vampires? Wicked.

how much IQ does that Allen have ? sad ending :( but still..good story :)

It's a good story, but I don't think it counts as an M rating. More like a T rating if you ask me. But, like I said, it was a good oneshot.

I loved how everything started it was so interesting, the fight and All but I hated how it ended it sucked that she died especially since He realized he 'LOVED' her and she dies! That sucks but it's interesting Cus now there's going to be a war! Oh how exciting!

Very interesting use of Vamps and Were lore. I'm most definately intrigued and concerned. I wanna know what happens next! XD I liked this quite a bit. It was very well written. the ending was a bit off for me, but I liked it a whole bunch.

God, this character of yours was really tragic. The kind of character that I can't help but hate, and feel sorry for.

This was still good. Tragic, but good. It makes me curious enough to read your other one shot.

Well... he's a dick.

But it was a good story!

I really liked it!

Poor thing, though... That werewolf...

Bitch had to die TWICE!

I liked it. Good job. :) Keep it up and keep stories and/or one shots coming!

Faith