Reviews for Heal
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
Soundly/Wind rushing through... this just sounded awkward, I have no idea what it meant

I like he first line 'cause it is an interesting contrast to the rest of the piece. The rest of the piece is really sweet and nice, I like it.

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Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
Gefällt mir gut, diese Fallschirmassoziation, auch die Wendung zum Religösen zum Schluß. Ich hätte es nicht unter "war" gepostet.