Well I pity her citizens more than her for having such useless queen and how they will suffer because the queen isn't smart enought to save her country. Other than that I really enjoyed their pure love

Guhh. This some real angsty, gay trivial. Very by-the-numbers trash fantasy. Could see the ending coming by the third paragraph...

Great story! One of the better Yuri romances I’ve read even though it’s so short. It obviously can’t have the kind if character development I love and look for but it’s only 10k words.

Truly a beautiful story. Yet I do not feel completely satisfied with the end, because I despise the idea of this awful kingdom winning the war and enslaving more people.
But I do wish I would be able to live just like them at the end. I never needed more than just a quiet hut in a forest with the one I love so it does seems like perfection to me. Still I wonder how they'll manage in the everyday life!
Thanks for sharing this with us :)

This is beautiful...

Yo! So I read your story over the summer, I had no net [saved it on a usb] and I thought you might like a review, though it's mostly commentary. Here it is!

Wow. Great story. I can almost feel all the emotions.. Man. Thank you for writing it.

Wow. This was, no joke one of THE BEST STORIES I have ever read. And it's hard to get me to say that. The plot was incredible, very good descriptions, and I love the characters. Splendid job. :)

That was really, really good! I like it a lot. The only thing I was a little disappointed about was the ending-it didn't quite satisfy me. I don't quite 'get' why they needed to forget about Ashvalaria. But that's just my opinion, other people may have a different one.

Great story, and keep writing!

I like how you ended this story, they were both slaves just from different perspectives. And now they are truly free for the first time in their entire lives, because even though Iliyana wanted to grant Kendra freedom she could not do that until she herself was free.

I think that this story makes me want to read more of you're work.

Oh my, this story is so beautiful! I didn't expect the story to end this way, but the surprise made it only more beautiful to me :) I'm really glad they got their happy-end at least (I'm a sucker for happy- ends). Very, very good job!

very enjoyable story, off to read some of your other ones. )

I'd love to have a life like that...with the person I love, no matter what we do; no matter how minor or how little does it matter to others - it'll probably weight like the whole world to me...xD thats' love, its a great story! xD hehe )

That story was probably the best I've read in a long time even compared to the books I've brought. The love and tenderness behind it is really touching and the writting style connects well to readers. Very good.