Reviews for Love is Strange
Project Empty chapter 8 . 6/4/2008
I really really like this story - thank god you have the tact to allow it to progress slowly. The characters are well developed and believable too.
Ty Taco chapter 8 . 6/4/2008
Hola.

So, the dream sequence was great.

Needs to be more REAL LIFE stuff like that.

SCREW THE FRIENDS!

SCREW EVERYTHING!

Just get them together!

lol

jk

Hopefully the friends do something to help them along.

Like...spin the bottle...or pic on Alex and Ryan sticks up for him.

Or Alex gets pissed about Ryan's ex.

idk

Just...something.

lol

CAN'T WAIT FOR 9!

xoxoxo,

Ty
American Schokolade chapter 8 . 6/4/2008
Wow, good story so far. I like your character development-they're very normal but believable.

In this chapter, though, I don't know if you did it on purpose, but Alex made a mistake calling the thing he hooked the rope onto a "bridle." Bridles are actually used when riding-when leading a horse (especially in a trailer), you use a halter. Everything else seems pretty okay, though, so I can't figure out if that mistake was intentional. )

Also, I think you overuse the word "lightly" a bit too much. It seems like everything these characters do, they do lightly. If you still want to keep that adverb in there, trying replacing it with synonyms like "softly" or "gently" so it doesn't sound so redundant. I'd suggest cutting a few of them out entirely, though, so that you can get some diversity in the descriptions of their actions.

Other than that, good job. I like the whole farm-themed stories, and this one is pretty good so far. Keep up the good work!
Ty Taco chapter 7 . 6/3/2008
Things need to get rollin here!

C'mon now.

Seven chapters and no slashy action!

lol

Can't wait for 8.

xoxoxo,

Ty
AngelBoy089 chapter 7 . 6/3/2008
I love it! Keep the updates coming! More action soon? :D

Great work.
dolly-dear chapter 7 . 6/3/2008
I love the fluff, but I need action! Preferably Ryan and Alex action! Puh-leez?
CeCeMarie chapter 6 . 6/2/2008
I'm sure from reading my other reviews you know what this one would say
dolly-dear chapter 6 . 6/2/2008
Oh my, it's so cute! I just love them both. Especially Alex, he is super sweet. I cannot wait for more!
OrangeFish chapter 6 . 6/2/2008
I have to say, this story is kicking off my summer wondefully. It makes me think of so many things and the emotion in all of Alex's thoughts and his subtle personality just make the story that much more real. I look forward to more, this is definitely one of my favorites. :)
CeCeMarie chapter 5 . 6/1/2008
Still loving the story.

Keep updating frequently!
CeCeMarie chapter 4 . 6/1/2008
Love Love Love
CeCeMarie chapter 3 . 5/30/2008
Wowowow. Love this story. Keep it up and up date regularly ]

Aw, Alex is so adorable
Limited Edition chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Hm...the summary doesn't do the story justice.

It's a shame that the first line is a passive one.

Alex' and Ryan's characters are well-developed and believable, good job.

So much sighing, oh sigh. Why does everybody sigh so much? He did this, he did that. Why is it interesting? But those things come with much writing, so it's just to practice and a personal author's voice will develop.
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