Aw, I love it :D :D :D

This seems like an outline for an eight or so chapter story. Nevertheless there was some interesting stuff in there.

I loved it. Sweet and to the point. I think Simon is a wonderful character!

Haha, who doesn't love the office-romance haha. And it is cute that the first thought was for him to save her. And it is quite ironic that right when he was about to her about his feelings, the guy gets freed.

Love the story!

~*~Ngoc1231~*~

aw! :)

i'm loving ALL of ur one-shots so far... :D

thanks for this AMAZING oneshot! :D

Oh wowy melikes. You managed to fit a whole action story into a one-shot. It did not lack any of the action. If anything, this made me feel as much or more active and alert than any action chapter fic I've read. Congratulations on a job well done!

wow i love this ...not all long, but it still has substance :) great job

Aw, cute :)

-Aria

Aw. Look, you can just see me melting.

Ri

Aww cute. I'll admit that generally I don't enjoy these fantasy scenarios (cops, FBI agents, or superstars, etc.), but you did a wonderful job and the characters are real people, too. It's definitely pretty action-packed for a romance, but I really liked that. I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

aw this was so cute! loved it )

I love all these one-shots's you're doing! Keep them coming!

Hey that was a fun/cute story! I really really liked it. Good characterization and development for a short story. The only suggestion I would have for you would be to carefully check your spelling. A lot of your words lacked tense markers, etc. "Rest" instead of "rested." Just be careful because little mistakes can create pretty big distractions. All in all, it was extremely enjoyable! Thanks for sharing! :)