again, very orignial. i read the summary and made the mistake of thinking it would closely relate to my piece 'Opposites of the Same'. It didn't. ;)

oh long titles that say so much always catch my attention

and the poem.

wow

wow

WOW.

[i can't seem to say much.]

this has deliciously fascinating lines

i like the first two lines of the second stanza

there is something abrupt and personal about it, it changes the whole tone of the poem.

i always find comparisons to drugs so vivid

and it always makes me wonder if that person has actually snorted cocaine

or if many who read it have

because i feel like the experience would be vastly more energetic than the thought

Oh wow. This is certainly a favorite.

Cheers,

timshel

really like the overall idea of the entire poem... extended metaphor

and i practically like the entire poem and all the lines but certain ones stood out

"all pallid leftovers and bleach soaked/irises, you’re composed solely of denial and/something that burns like snorting cocaine." beautiful

just... love your poem, really. fantastic job :]