Reviews for Blood Bound
SundayMorning73 chapter 2 . 4/14/2013
Will you ever put up the edited version of blood bound?
Guest chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
i was woundering, while you are editing this story is it possible that you put up the original as well, i read it ages ago, and only just found it again i would really love to read it again.

Thanks

Shannon
SCHATZI87 chapter 2 . 1/31/2010
great start so far. i cant wait for more. i would like to know what she looks like. i will be anxiously waiting for more thanks for sharing a part of you :D
Jessica chapter 8 . 12/12/2009
I had read this story a while ago but never left a review. I just read it again and absolutely loved it! You did a great job of setting up a different world without going into too many details.

I loved the main characters but enjoyed the side ones like Dottie as well. :) You did a really really really great job with this whole story!
Aaerie chapter 8 . 10/23/2009
is this the last the last chapter
momo3069 chapter 8 . 9/3/2009
nice story!
Kani chapter 4 . 7/29/2009
This is really good! The only flaws I've found are missing words here and there (you might want to read through the chapters slowly), and in this chapter, this word mixup/typo: "a viscous killing machine". I believe you mean "vicious", not "viscous". I'm pretty sure Greyson isn't a sticky, gluey-like killing machine. Lol! Keep up the awesome writing!
idontlikethis chapter 4 . 7/23/2009
Cliffe! I am in love with this story so much!

-Flick
idontlikethis chapter 3 . 7/23/2009
Whoa! A few grammer mistakes but other than that...

AWSOME!
idontlikethis chapter 2 . 7/23/2009
"it always left be feeling cranky and exhausted"

Shouldn't it be "it always left me feeling"... Just thought I would point that out.

A really great chapter; not too rushed, not too slowed. Great job.

-Flick
idontlikethis chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
This is a really great start to a hopefully great story! I couldn't find anything to pick at because I was to enthrilled with it. I think that you have a realy talent. Kudoos to you!

-Flick
atreyu love chapter 8 . 3/8/2009
Love the story D

although the story progressed a bit faster

than i would have liked, but

im off to the sequel now :D
reiko chapter 4 . 3/8/2009
hey there! i just wanted to point out that you have a spelling error near the end of the page, it's actually

"vicious" :)
tripoli chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
The premise of this story is SO similar to Robin McKinley's Sunshine, have you read it? It's remarkably identical to it: the main character as a baker, the distrust of vampires, the small-town setting, the Otherworld Justice Division-if you haven't read it you should check it out!
Jessica chapter 8 . 2/21/2009
The whole story is amazing. I enjoyed every bit of it. Thank you for not having them go at it like hormonal teenagers from the very beginning. Many people on this site lack the ability to develop anything prior to physical relationships and your writing is a very fortunate exception.

The writing and humor are brilliant as well. You describe things enough to make it seem real without going into overflowing details about every aspect of a scene. Overall, great job and I can't wait to read more of your work!
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