Reviews for Blood Bound |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you'll put the story soon, the first chapter was interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not good, she could be next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you ever put up the edited version of blood bound? |
![]() ![]() i was woundering, while you are editing this story is it possible that you put up the original as well, i read it ages ago, and only just found it again i would really love to read it again. Thanks Shannon |
![]() ![]() ![]() great start so far. i cant wait for more. i would like to know what she looks like. i will be anxiously waiting for more thanks for sharing a part of you :D |
![]() ![]() I had read this story a while ago but never left a review. I just read it again and absolutely loved it! You did a great job of setting up a different world without going into too many details. I loved the main characters but enjoyed the side ones like Dottie as well. :) You did a really really really great job with this whole story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this the last the last chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story! |
![]() ![]() This is really good! The only flaws I've found are missing words here and there (you might want to read through the chapters slowly), and in this chapter, this word mixup/typo: "a viscous killing machine". I believe you mean "vicious", not "viscous". I'm pretty sure Greyson isn't a sticky, gluey-like killing machine. Lol! Keep up the awesome writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliffe! I am in love with this story so much! -Flick |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! A few grammer mistakes but other than that... AWSOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "it always left be feeling cranky and exhausted" Shouldn't it be "it always left me feeling"... Just thought I would point that out. A really great chapter; not too rushed, not too slowed. Great job. -Flick |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really great start to a hopefully great story! I couldn't find anything to pick at because I was to enthrilled with it. I think that you have a realy talent. Kudoos to you! -Flick |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story D although the story progressed a bit faster than i would have liked, but im off to the sequel now :D |
![]() ![]() hey there! i just wanted to point out that you have a spelling error near the end of the page, it's actually "vicious" :) |