Reviews for Blood Bound
Phoenixangel11 chapter 1 . 10/3/2008

I read your story last night and finished it today.

My God do you know how amazing you are :O

Your story blew me away and I love both of your characters, Daphne's strong and unyielding personality. Greyson's calm, softness with the inarguable power!

I'm gonna log in and add this to faves later but but WOW I love it
Elodie Wolfe chapter 8 . 9/19/2008
OMG, LOVED this, I love vampire stories, that are original. New favorite story, and author. Off to read the sequel.

LOVE Greyson, and the idea!

janget chapter 8 . 8/30/2008
Your story is great I loved it . I have read vampire romance for years. I could get into this story easily . I look forward to the sequel Thanks for a great story.
Ad88 chapter 8 . 7/30/2008
It was an interesting read. Very well done. Can't wait for more!
lostlette chapter 8 . 7/25/2008
I LOVE THIS STORY! Is there a sequel?
Christy Leigh Stewart chapter 8 . 7/24/2008
Great job on this, I love your first person POV, I want to try that one day.

You should think about a sequal!
Sey chapter 8 . 7/6/2008
This is a very good story. I'm not really too keen on 1st person stories but it was really good. I also like your writing style. Though there are those rare typos that you should watch out for. Other than that, I like all the characters in the story and the way you portray them.
bongi chapter 8 . 7/4/2008
This is a wonderful story with a shamefully small number of reviews. I love your characters. They are so gentle and kind. Can't wait to read the sequel.
DarkFireWithin chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
I see some others have pointed out the similarities between this book and "Sunshine" by Robin Mckinley. Having just finished that last week... there's way TOO many similarities.

Don't get me wrong. It's a good story, and you've tweaked it enough to be your own, but it's more than obvious that most of your inspiration comes from that book. Perhaps you read it soon before writing this, or something. However, in the future, I'd suggest trying to formulate your own ideas. This story is ALMOST more suited to than to fictionpress.
RKRBirdgirl chapter 8 . 6/27/2008
How bout a squel?
reader chapter 8 . 6/25/2008
Ohmigosh that was such a loveable, amazing story! I'm sorry I didn't review chapter by chapter; I was really caught up in it. I am surprised that you managed to make this story so compact...I had my doubts that the story would be wrapped up well when I was at the fourth chapter or so, but it turned out great! Your imagery and attention to detail is great, as is the overall syntax. Thank you so much. I had a lovely time reading it.
Lulla Bell chapter 8 . 6/20/2008
Awsome story! It kept me rivited. Did I spell that right? I don't care anymore. I was suppose to be in bed about three hours ago but I just couldn't force myself to stop reading. Anywho great story.
Sweet Child chapter 8 . 6/20/2008
First of all, I absolutely loved this. Despite the fact that their relationship was moving on really fast, it didn't feel like it. The way you wrote it gave their emotions real dept.

Also, I found the beginning of the story hilarious. Simply because it reminded me of a parody of Harry Potter. It had the feel to it. And I don't mean this in a negative way.

The only thing that kind of irked me is the fact that you don't seem to beta read your story before posting it. The first two chapters, if I remember correctly, were without any mistakes. But after that, words were left out, sometimes you used two synonimous words in a row, or forgot to add a letter (for example, you wrote nd instead of and). Now, the story was really awesome, and I get the feeling that those mistakes aren't made because you don't know any better, but rather because you wrote the chapters in a hurry and didn't bother to beta. I would be really glad if you would do so from now on, because it gets annoying after a while if I always have to guess which word you actually wanted to use.

Other than that, I love loved it. Your writing styles is also great; you manage to make even the serious situations humorous. I hope that you'll be writing a sequel, because I can't wait.
NMPress chapter 8 . 6/18/2008
This was a great story. Just amazing. I wish it wasn't over so soon. I vote ABSOLUTELY YES on a sequel, lol. It was a wonderful plot, wonderful sex scene, wonderful characters, wonderful action packed sequence... just all of it! :D I look forward to more from you.
NMPress chapter 4 . 6/18/2008
I'm reading your fic all in one sitting but I just had to stop and review. This is amazing! I love Vampire stories and this one is very original. I love your characters and your writing is beautiful. You manage to answer our questions in a clever way without revealing too much and yet leaving some mystery. I am just fascinated by it. You really should have more reviews, you deserve it. :D I can't wait to read more.
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