Reviews for Seven Deadly Not to Mention Hot Sins
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 2 . 3/20/2011
omg please update soon! :D

i kept laughing through reading this whole thing :D
leavemeialone chapter 2 . 3/6/2011
This is interesting. I can't tell which one of the guys she will end up with. The guys are very good looking. It's very confusing, with seven guys, to remember who is who. I like this story so far. I can't wait to see what will come next.
CaitlinEA chapter 2 . 7/18/2010
Naw ! Ryan and Mia are so cute together !
HelgaBertoni chapter 2 . 5/23/2010
Love the story so far, update soon!
pinkfairydust chapter 2 . 12/14/2009
A little unbelievable, but I'm happy to go along with it! :) It's very well written, so congrats on that - so often I read something with a similar storyline (girl is best friends with millions of guys) and it's so badly written that makes me want to scream. So well done!
LaMeO1 chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
this is a great story!

please update it!

musicfan567 chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
Please finish this story, please. Write and post more very, very soon. It's funny to me so far.
HiddenRoses.BlankPages chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
Wow! Its been what? 9 months since you last updated? Update agains soon please. Great story. Nice chapter.
UponAtlas chapter 2 . 12/17/2008
hey great chapter..though you really need to edit this thing..

love it

shortii over and out
Electric Rose chapter 2 . 10/15/2008

I like it so far :)

Ryan is definitely my fave guy so far, but that could possibly be because he's the one with the most obvious development..stuff. I dunno. But i like them all :)
lahunnybee chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
I really loved your opening of the Prolouge. Your spelling was great and so was your grammar.
Silent's Whisper chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
Wow I love this story! I really can't wait for the next chapter_ I already know that Mai is my favorite are doing great with this story!
AllSpark chapter 2 . 6/7/2008
Nice... I really like their friendly banter and look forward to the next chapter. On another note; in the start you called the housekeeper Jules but a little farther down it became Jill. A little slip up maybe? Please update soon
DetachedAngel777 chapter 2 . 6/6/2008 it already...update asap :p
Jenneration chapter 2 . 6/6/2008
I absolutely love where this story is heading! The characters are so fun, and quite interesting. They really are what keeps the story going, and you've done a great job of introducing them so far.

The concept of this story is exciting, and I would say original, too. Although having seven [super hot] best guy friends as a girl could be considered far-fetched in our world, I think it is so fun to read about.

Oh, and I hope you don't take this to offense, but in the prolog, when you would type out her verbs as a single sentence, (i.e. "Grins.") it would annoy me very much. I don't know why, but I think it'd be better if you actually write out what she's doing?

Anyway, you've got me hooked. I can't wait to find out what happens next! :)

Keep writing,

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