Reviews for Seven Deadly Not to Mention Hot Sins |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() omg please update soon! :D i kept laughing through reading this whole thing :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is interesting. I can't tell which one of the guys she will end up with. The guys are very good looking. It's very confusing, with seven guys, to remember who is who. I like this story so far. I can't wait to see what will come next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naw ! Ryan and Mia are so cute together ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story so far, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A little unbelievable, but I'm happy to go along with it! :) It's very well written, so congrats on that - so often I read something with a similar storyline (girl is best friends with millions of guys) and it's so badly written that makes me want to scream. So well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a great story! please update it! D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please finish this story, please. Write and post more very, very soon. It's funny to me so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Its been what? 9 months since you last updated? Update agains soon please. Great story. Nice chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey great chapter..though you really need to edit this thing.. love it shortii over and out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hooray! I like it so far :) Ryan is definitely my fave guy so far, but that could possibly be because he's the one with the most obvious development..stuff. I dunno. But i like them all :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved your opening of the Prolouge. Your spelling was great and so was your grammar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I love this story! I really can't wait for the next chapter_ I already know that Mai is my favorite are doing great with this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice... I really like their friendly banter and look forward to the next chapter. On another note; in the start you called the housekeeper Jules but a little farther down it became Jill. A little slip up maybe? Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol...love it already...update asap :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love where this story is heading! The characters are so fun, and quite interesting. They really are what keeps the story going, and you've done a great job of introducing them so far. The concept of this story is exciting, and I would say original, too. Although having seven [super hot] best guy friends as a girl could be considered far-fetched in our world, I think it is so fun to read about. Oh, and I hope you don't take this to offense, but in the prolog, when you would type out her verbs as a single sentence, (i.e. "Grins.") it would annoy me very much. I don't know why, but I think it'd be better if you actually write out what she's doing? Anyway, you've got me hooked. I can't wait to find out what happens next! :) Keep writing, Jenny |