Personally, I think there's more to Hal than his cocky, asshole-y exterior. But then again, that's just me - I like to see the best in everyone.

The dialog flows really well and is great. I like Katharine as a character and person, her humor is awesomely funny! Chad and his buddies crack me up. This story is set up really well so far, great work, off to reawd more :)

x mandy

~review marathon, link on my profile~

OH MY FUCKING GOODNESS GRACIOUS. It's over. NO! I am going to miss this story so freaking much. Do you know how much I cried during the last chapter? (Well, I'm usually very emotional, so I can blame it on you.) A lot! I had to couch my tissues down the toilet because I didn't want people to have evidence of me crying over a story. So...yeah. I LOVED THIS. I WAS ADORABLE.

Ok, I'll leave you alone now. You probably think I'm mental. :)

Awe. How adorable. :)

Yeah, I'm probably not gong to review every chapter, because I tend to forget. Especially when I'm reading completed stories. So, yeah. Awe. Those two are so cute... In a...interesting way.

Bahahaha. That was so cute. :)

So good! I really enjoyed both your writing and your characters.

I found it really cute when he said "Kiss Me Kate" because it reminded me of the musical...

Was that an intentional reference? :P

I love this story! You really developed Kate's character really well. (: The sensory details and dialogue that you use make me feel what she's feeling. Haha ~ What really brought me into reading this story is the unique plot and all the drama. Sometimes it felt slow, but maybe I'm just a very impatient reader. xP You are a really talented writer! (:

I love this story! I think you are a really talented writer- so good! I hate that Hal doesn't even stick up for her though! When is he freaking going to become a man?

Great story. I am so glad they worked it out.

i hated it until the sixth chapter. and now i'm in love with it.

love this story and i know a ryan houser i thought tht was funny

hellos! I just wanted to say that this was one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. Most of the stories on here, I can read it over several days, but this one, I just couldn't seem to stop! You really have a talent for making ordinary people seem so extraordinary, from the way they feel like they can relate to the character, but have no relation at all at the same time. Apart from a few grammatical errors, this was also one of the most flawless ones I've read as well. I'm certainly looking forward to reading your Difference story as well now. I do hope that you'll continue to write in the future because I'm sure that I'll stay a dedicated fan. Fantastick job, and keep this up. (;

okay so I know this is quite embarrassing, and I know u already finished the story but I just have to say something before the story is over and my dreams are crushed because Kate and Hal are over. Hal and Katie are the cutest, realest couple ive seen on fictionpress in a long time. They are so good together and you are such a strong author which I guess is the point of your degree... I actually squeal like a little kid when I read this story. I just hope that I'll be as strong as an author as you are. This is probably one of the best stories on this website even if the idea is a little cliched. This is the only story of yours i have read and Im not done with it yet but i already love you as an author. I really think the world would be better if something you wrote got published :D Good luck in everything you try to do. And may I say that I'm also kind of jealous because I can't even get halfway through a story without letting my ADD getting the better of me let alone an entire story! Good Job :)

Are you going to write more? Because I would seriously read thatt . . .