So I just finished reading your story.. And damn, I loved it so much! It was hilarious! You're very talented!
I read a chapter of this when I was having a bad day and it made me feel so much better. During the last chapters, I could feel her heartbreak and I wanted to cry so much (but I couldn't because there were people around me ugh). You're really great at portraying strong emotions in your writing.
I really hope I'm able to write like you do one day! :)

Everything about this story is amazing! It's so astounding, it leaves me flabbergasted.. I just loved this piece of literature, I can't even verbalize it socially (network-ly of course) Reallt loved the character development during the story, and your vocabulary strength is great!
: ) thanks again!
Caity

Don't get me wrong. I love this story. I just feel Katie makes a fool out of herself to much for it to be funny. Like the way they break up was very harsh on Katie. It just seems like she is the only one who cares about their relationship. Because of this the story seems to be lacking that spark that few stories have. It just feels incomplete. But nevertheless it is still a favorite story of mine.

I've been hitnin the boob with a tennis ball, let me tell you, it is not fun.

This story was amazing! I will admit though, I getting beyond annoyed with both Hal and Kate, with them both obviously being in love with one another but never saying anything! Ugh, I wanted to reach into the story and slap the both of them! lol.
But yes, the characters were absolutely lovable and the plot kept me intriuged. And not to mention, I was instantly hooked.
Thank you so much for sharing this story!

P.S. This is one of my favourites and you're a truly talented writer.

I love Kate, just sayin'. She's fricken hilarious! xD

Haha, this chapter was hilarious! xD

And so it starts, he's falling in love with her. I LOVE this story! Seriously it's hillarious! Keep writing. (obviously not this story it's complete just in general)

I love this story so so so fucking much! Oh, my God. You talented woman you!

What jerks

So I just finished reading this story after a day, a very long night of reading, and a semi long morning. I was sneaking chapters in between work trying to read this! I could not stop giggling throughout this story either. I love Katie, she is hilarious! I love Hal too. They are both very likeable characters. Lily and I are like long lost sisters we act so much alike, I am a gushy Disney obsessed girl! I loved this story so much. This is the most chemistry I have ever read between two characters on this site, point blank. I just can't believe that this story is over. When I finished reading this...I didn't know what to do I was sitting there looking lost. I still can't stop thinking about Katie and Hal. They had soooooo many cute moments together. I kept sighing like the hopeless romantic I am when cute scenes between them were happening. I would kill for someone like Hal trying to fake date me, lol. But you did a wonderful job with this story, five stars! Bravo! Encore! (Okay I'm going to go now, I'm embarrassing myself with the theatre talk) Please keep up the good writing with these humorous characters of yours. Great Job though, for real.

Classychik! :D

I loved this book, it's one of the best I've read on fictionpress!

I loved it so much!

GODAMMIT. STOP WITH ALL OF THE INTERRUPTIONS.
THEY'RE SUCH AN UNFORTUNATE 'COUPLE'.
*sigh* But they're so cute.

Lol loved the part where Courtney asked her what she was breaking ! Unfortunately it's her head that she's trying to break