Reviews for A Wisp Of Cloud
somebodystopme chapter 4 . 9/27/2009
I really enjoy the interaction between the characters, and the description of Osborne. Another really descriptive, enjoyable to read chapter segment. (:
somebodystopme chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
Haha, this had me on the edge of my seat. He prepares the tea very meticulously, and things are spilling or threatening to, and in the end, he sits down with a little hamster. An interesting character, to say the least.
somebodystopme chapter 2 . 9/27/2009
Once again, I have to gush over the way you describe things. It makes it all so real. The description of the shadows creeping was chillingly well-written.
somebodystopme chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
I love the way you seem to really put thought into being descriptive, I can really see the scene unfold. (:
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Great job at description. The ending was dramatic. Nice work. Keep writing!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~