I really enjoy the interaction between the characters, and the description of Osborne. Another really descriptive, enjoyable to read chapter segment. (:

Haha, this had me on the edge of my seat. He prepares the tea very meticulously, and things are spilling or threatening to, and in the end, he sits down with a little hamster. An interesting character, to say the least.

Once again, I have to gush over the way you describe things. It makes it all so real. The description of the shadows creeping was chillingly well-written.

I love the way you seem to really put thought into being descriptive, I can really see the scene unfold. (:

Great job at description. The ending was dramatic. Nice work. Keep writing!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~