Reviews for A Wisp Of Cloud |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy the interaction between the characters, and the description of Osborne. Another really descriptive, enjoyable to read chapter segment. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, this had me on the edge of my seat. He prepares the tea very meticulously, and things are spilling or threatening to, and in the end, he sits down with a little hamster. An interesting character, to say the least. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again, I have to gush over the way you describe things. It makes it all so real. The description of the shadows creeping was chillingly well-written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way you seem to really put thought into being descriptive, I can really see the scene unfold. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job at description. The ending was dramatic. Nice work. Keep writing! Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |