Reviews for the past 'you' staring back at you
dollface and her cancer chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
i remember. and miss it. maybe that's why this piece gives me that little ache. - or likely, you just chose the right words.
the brightest fell chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
I like this, especially the last stanza, an apt ending to your poem. (:
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
i love your last stanza.
Doxology chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Ah, I like this. A lot. My favorite line was: "Do i remember how it is/ to feel fearless?/Yes, it presses in my head." And the words "feel fearless" have a strange sort of kinship. They go together well, I dunno, it's just awesome.

Cheers,

timshel