Reviews for the past 'you' staring back at you |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i remember. and miss it. maybe that's why this piece gives me that little ache. - or likely, you just chose the right words. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this, especially the last stanza, an apt ending to your poem. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your last stanza. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, I like this. A lot. My favorite line was: "Do i remember how it is/ to feel fearless?/Yes, it presses in my head." And the words "feel fearless" have a strange sort of kinship. They go together well, I dunno, it's just awesome. Cheers, timshel |