Reviews for Goodbye
Isca chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
Beautiful.

Despite the poem having only a few words, it was able to express a deep sense of sorrow.

Excellent work!
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
What a sad poem. /

Interesting idea, though! The only thing is I think your format got a little messed up; at first I didn't even notice the 'life is' line because it's off to the side.