Reviews for i don't know what i'm looking for
arrhythmias chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
oh, wow. this is just wonderful (:
Inapplicable chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
I've read a lot of your works and I seem to like this one the most. I must say that you write so meaningfully, also, that I feel the power of your words more when I read them out loud.

I can see the expression on the faces of everyone in your text, and it is brilliant. You are amazing.
Sophie chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
You're an incredible writer, David. Thanks for sharing this with me.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
this is a beautiful piece of prose you've written here.

i love your prose when you tell a story.

well, i love it even when it's seemingly aimless rambling too

because both convey such strong emotions that it's hard not to notice and like it.

but when you tell a story, the way you position the thoughts and draw such a colorful is just great.

:) still can't wait until you're old and writing full novels.

i'll read every one ten times.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
I felt this was very brutally honest. I feel this way sometimes too.