oh, wow. this is just wonderful (:

I've read a lot of your works and I seem to like this one the most. I must say that you write so meaningfully, also, that I feel the power of your words more when I read them out loud.

I can see the expression on the faces of everyone in your text, and it is brilliant. You are amazing.

You're an incredible writer, David. Thanks for sharing this with me.

this is a beautiful piece of prose you've written here.

i love your prose when you tell a story.

well, i love it even when it's seemingly aimless rambling too

because both convey such strong emotions that it's hard not to notice and like it.

but when you tell a story, the way you position the thoughts and draw such a colorful is just great.

:) still can't wait until you're old and writing full novels.

i'll read every one ten times.

I felt this was very brutally honest. I feel this way sometimes too.