Reviews for The Light
Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I have to say I really don't like your rhyme scheme. It's one of those easy and slightly silly rhymes and for me, it completely undermines any meaning you could have with this poem.

I do like your isolation of the last line though, it's a more serious climax to a somewhat playful poem. I also like the questioning nature of it. More of that and perhaps removing the rhyme scheme altogether would really help this piece in my opinion.

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