Hey! Stewart here. I haven't got around to returning your reviews for a while and for that I'm sorry. But thanks a lot! It's great to get feedback on my stuff, especially since I'm on such uncertain ground with a lot of it. Sure my friends say it's great, but at the same time aren't friends supoosed to say that?

Anyways, I really liked this poem. I thought it made a lot of sense, exactly as you said. At first glance it's confusing, but if one looks deeper they can see the true face of this beautiful poem. Keep writing!

-Stewart

wow that's amazing hun.

... I'm hoping that the guy in that story is me.

it's beautiful