I absolutely love this story and I hope you're still working on it. I love the characterization, I LOVE Saul, and Danny, knew kids like them growing up in one way or another, and it's a great story. Keep up the great work.

ARE YOU EVER GOING TO UPDATE? I LOVE THIS STORY MAN, YOU'VE LEFT US HANGING FOR SO LONG

Oh come on! Cant believe I started reading the only fic of yours that wasn't finished, apparently!
I wish you would update but I guess it's been long to hope for such a thing.. I was really loving the story, though. Saul and Danny were great.

I am enthralled with this story! And even though it has been three years, I still have hope it will be finished.

So glad that you did not abandon this story. I like it. Will be waiting for updates ;)

Love the story so far, you are like the modern day DJ Salinger

its been 2 years! when are you going to update this story! please be very very very soon! i love it so far!

I really really love how intimately you write your characters- how naked and full of faults they are. It's beautiful. And you've handled the abuse aspect of this well- how Saul can't see the links to his behaviour. I know you haven't finished this but I decided to read it anyway, and even if you don't what you've written is somehow enough.

Kudos

Suki

I don't know when or if you'll see this as its been quite some time since you've written on this, but I have to tell you that this is one of the best stories that I've read on fictionpress ever. It is absolutely beautiful and emotional and physical and erotic and sensual and filled with so much wonderful writing. Saul and Danny are just exquisite characters. I love them both so much. you have such wonderful flow and pacing and I can't even begin to tell you how wonderful it is. I had to stop reading like 6 chapters back so that I wouldn't finish it too soon. I do that with all my favorite books. That is how good it is. I don't know if you have plans to continue this or not, but it is so very very very good. Beautifully written!

Please update soon. I am so into this story and I am emotionally invested in these characters. Please update...when you can...hopefully soon :)

Awsum story, pls update soon :)

i really liked this story!

Super amazing, wish there was more now! Following! :) Thanks for posting

Are you going to update this ever again? D:
I read all 19 chapters in two days.. Mind you, nights. I really like the style of your writing. Simple and easy to apprehend unlike some authors who use too many literary devices.
Anyway, keep this up! I hope you'll update soon!

please come back! Usually I prefer "happy go lucky" romance stories but I must admit that I love this story. I'm definitely a huge fan of Danny he seems to be the only hope for Saul getting back on track. They both deserve the happiness they could/have found together :)
I hope you are going to finish this story, Saul deserves it ;)