Reviews for Stepbrothers
Love it chapter 19 . 9/9/2016
I absolutely love this story and I hope you're still working on it. I love the characterization, I LOVE Saul, and Danny, knew kids like them growing up in one way or another, and it's a great story. Keep up the great work.
UnfortunatelyA chapter 19 . 12/29/2013
atenea-in-the-sky chapter 19 . 12/9/2013
Oh come on! Cant believe I started reading the only fic of yours that wasn't finished, apparently!
I wish you would update but I guess it's been long to hope for such a thing.. I was really loving the story, though. Saul and Danny were great.
faroffdream chapter 19 . 10/21/2013
I am enthralled with this story! And even though it has been three years, I still have hope it will be finished.
Syta chapter 19 . 10/8/2013
So glad that you did not abandon this story. I like it. Will be waiting for updates ;)
Umsanalocality chapter 8 . 9/14/2013
Love the story so far, you are like the modern day DJ Salinger
Person Chick chapter 19 . 5/31/2013
its been 2 years! when are you going to update this story! please be very very very soon! i love it so far!
nffhkasjfnbsdkjb chapter 10 . 5/8/2013
I really really love how intimately you write your characters- how naked and full of faults they are. It's beautiful. And you've handled the abuse aspect of this well- how Saul can't see the links to his behaviour. I know you haven't finished this but I decided to read it anyway, and even if you don't what you've written is somehow enough.


Nicholas Scott chapter 19 . 1/23/2013
I don't know when or if you'll see this as its been quite some time since you've written on this, but I have to tell you that this is one of the best stories that I've read on fictionpress ever. It is absolutely beautiful and emotional and physical and erotic and sensual and filled with so much wonderful writing. Saul and Danny are just exquisite characters. I love them both so much. you have such wonderful flow and pacing and I can't even begin to tell you how wonderful it is. I had to stop reading like 6 chapters back so that I wouldn't finish it too soon. I do that with all my favorite books. That is how good it is. I don't know if you have plans to continue this or not, but it is so very very very good. Beautifully written!
Guest chapter 19 . 1/17/2013
Please update soon. I am so into this story and I am emotionally invested in these characters. Please update...when you can...hopefully soon :)
27058 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Awsum story, pls update soon :)
Guest chapter 19 . 12/25/2012
i really liked this story!
KatieBobb chapter 18 . 9/4/2012
Super amazing, wish there was more now! Following! :) Thanks for posting
Wicked witch Ayumi chapter 19 . 8/12/2012
Are you going to update this ever again? D:
I read all 19 chapters in two days.. Mind you, nights. I really like the style of your writing. Simple and easy to apprehend unlike some authors who use too many literary devices.
Anyway, keep this up! I hope you'll update soon!
sneaky-fox chapter 19 . 7/1/2012
please come back! Usually I prefer "happy go lucky" romance stories but I must admit that I love this story. I'm definitely a huge fan of Danny he seems to be the only hope for Saul getting back on track. They both deserve the happiness they could/have found together :)
I hope you are going to finish this story, Saul deserves it ;)
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