Reviews for Stepbrothers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hey! please finish this story! I love it so much! Saul and Dannu are such REAL characters, I feel like they really existed! Hope you post the next chapter pronto. Cheers, Dani |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! Please, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is indeed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel bad for Saul. |
![]() ![]() Errr. Where's the rest of it? You better update or I'll... be not very happy! Got to admit, Perfect Uncle is still my favourite. But if you update this one could be! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story. I seems like you struggle to keep a plot going long term. For awhile I was feeling very conflicted about whether or not to make this a favourite story, but ultimately many of the situations and expressions of the characters I found returning to my mind, so I realized that whatever issues I may have with this story, it has affected me. I'm happy to see that the story is still in progress. There are a lot of plot-threads hanging in the air, so I am excited to see how it all pans out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story and can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww god! I want to read more of this. I just have to know how it ends! For now I'll finish reading all your works though. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I just wish Saul wouldn't be so stubborn with his emotions! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And this kids is why you don't do drugs. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how they speak. The contractions. I guess it's a weird thing to notice, but I do and I like it.'maybe cause it's different. And I like how they act, too. Not like some pansy-ass gayboys a girl's created who acts like a girl. Because these guys are actual guys, that's cool. It's just annoying when a girl writes a guy as if he's a girl. Unless that didn't make sense. Prolly didn't. Oh well. And I really like their names! :D I thought it was finished, probably wouldn't have started reading it if I hadn't thought that. Because I'm an impatient person, and also because sometimes people never finish their stories...um. I hope you do finishe this, I didn't mean that like a guilt trip, thought that's how it sounds. This story's pretty ace. I'm not really into smut and stuff, but this isn't really gratuitous sex for the sake of it so I guess it doesn't really count as smut. Hmmyeah :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just gonna assume this is done but I loved it, very very very much. And it was overall amazing and awesome and yes. I love them. I love them a lot. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have fallen in love with this story ENTIRELY. I love it. I was reading it on my phone and actually cried when it wouldnt go on to the next chapter - BECAUSE THERE ISNT ONE THERE! D': please tell me that you've not abandonned it! And that you will update soon? Because I really do adore it! Much love! Ayjayssis |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O AMAZING~ Now update! And... where is this story going? ~iSUL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh~ this chappy is so swet! ~iSUL |