Reviews for Stepbrothers
Starlette420 chapter 18 . 2/26/2010
i love this alot! :D

more soon please XD
GreenVixen chapter 18 . 2/2/2010
i know u said not to give up on u but i just checked when the last time u update this fic and its been awhile so common update plz?
Mmm.bby chapter 18 . 1/16/2010
Love it.

I really hope you update this story sometime in the near future
chickie chapter 18 . 11/26/2009
Three sittings and about 6 hours later I finish one of THEE greatest stories. You have to come back to this one. I have to Know what Saul is going to do and how things will go with Danny. Please! I have to know ( Very great fic, hope to read more within this year :)
Auphora chapter 18 . 11/15/2009
This story is amazing; I'm sure you've read that in a ton of other reviews, but that's because it's true. Your writing is really good and your characters have very realistic human characteristics; nevertheless, I plan to read more stories written by you if there are any.

Unlike a lot of the stories I read, this one really shows that it is in a guy's point of view. Saul's way of thinking and interacting isn't feminine, and as a girl who doesn't really interact with guys all that much, this story was really interesting. My brother's way of thinking suddenly makes sense! (laughs at self)

Looking forward to the next chapter,

Wishing you the best,

cinderandsmoke chapter 18 . 11/4/2009
Great job!
Opheliac in Me chapter 18 . 10/19/2009
gah! update
Vulpine Ninja chapter 18 . 10/17/2009
Well, the sex part is hot, and Danny is sweet. But, overall most of the time the story is a lil mundane. No offense though. I've been waiting for a climax as I read (or some sort of cliffhanger), but then again the story has not ended yet.

Even so, I'm curious to know what will happen to those two. So please do update (although if my review seems a lil too late)
kerryannh chapter 18 . 10/6/2009
Very good story. I love your use of dialogue. It makes the story very realistic. I hope that Saul does not leave Danny to go live with Greg. It sounds like bad things could happen involving alcohol and cheating. I can understand Saul's desire to get away from his mother and Andrew. I a hope Saul does not get abused again. It is so sad that his mother never paid enough attention to him to realize that he was being molested. So sad. Iam looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good writing.
MyLifeSoundtrack chapter 18 . 9/19/2009
Love it, can't wait for the next chapter.
littlemischief chapter 18 . 8/13/2009
Great story. A real pleasure to read. See you at the next chapter!

Bonne continuation: )
Rachizzle chapter 18 . 7/18/2009
Totally knew that was coming. I mean, I knew he was gonna end up staying with Greg, haha. Hmm. Why was Danny there? Looking for Saul? :O!

Great chapter, as usual.
kepteinen chapter 18 . 7/5/2009
Saul-twitter awesome.
Naomi Schemer chapter 18 . 7/3/2009
Well, I'm glad I'm still here. Excellent chapter, and I wouldn't mind reading whatever Saul felt like Twitting.
Iconic chapter 18 . 6/29/2009
I am very glad for the update. I seriously love this story! Really, it's great. I am very interested to see how things progress from here; how will Saul and Danny make a relationship work, will living with Greg be to tempting for Saul...So many questions, but I guess I'm just going to have to wait for the answere until you update again. So please, sooner is better. You rock.
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