Reviews for Left Alone
Gaki Toki chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
I must admit that I'm rather tired of the teen angst portrayed here. I've read so many poems just like this one, they all seem to blend together in my memories. I suggest finding a different topic to write about, for if this is true, you'll never find peace writing about this stuff, with all these cliched lines. No offense, your rhyming is rather well done, although your rhythm falls off the wagon sometimes. Such as the line, "Nothing for them to feel" seems very...out of place.

You understand, I suppose. Overall it was alright. Teenage pain and self-imposed misery is a little over-done though. I suggest a happier subject next time.

Gaki Toki