Reviews for Pulse
LorriBetha chapter 6 . 6/22/2009
Ah! A new chapter, and an Am-Az-Ing chapter it was! I have to write this as quickly as possibly, coz I'm about to rush through my door and off to school (I'm late!) So I'm sorry for all tbhe misspellings there may be. Okay, just wanted to quickly let you know just how much I adore this story, and I'm loving this chapter like crazy, especially when Nate ALMOST said something we're all dying to hear! UPDATE again really soon please please PLEASE?
LorriBetha chapter 5 . 2/28/2009
Oh god, I was giggling at the part about going for a 'ride', it sounded just like one of my perverted boy-whose-a-friend (just to make it clear :P) at school, he always says stuff like that, or twists your words to make them sound dirty. Actually, practically all my friends (including myself!) can do that, I really need to meet some normal people :P It was another fabulous chapter, and I hope you will UPDATE soon.

Plus, I've also had an idea. This is definitely one of my favourite stories at the moment, and I'm ashamed of people when I look at how many reviews your getting. You deserve so many more than that. So here's my idea, I think i'm going to publisise your story in my story, you know, in an authors note, to ask them to visit this story, coz i really think you deserve it, what d'you think? Good idea, bad idea? Let me know so I can add it to my authors note and post it!
southernsinger21 chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
I am officially in love.

I haven't checked the "young adult" section in some time because I've found the stories to be too shallow. But yours is different, it has depth. You should really consider getting it published for real one day. It's that good. Better than some books I've read. I'm so excited and looking forward to reading what you have to write in the future, and not just with this story, but with others as well.

And that kiss... all I can say is wow. Just wow.

Keep up the great work!
LorriBetha chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
Aww! Ryan and Nate's first kiss, how sweet! And it really was a sweet kiss, who wouldn't want their first kiss with a different guy to be in an empty stables, sounded so great! Hope you will UPDATE again soon, this story is fantatsic! (And I'm glad you like my nickname, only my family calls it me now luckily, but I got a weird one today (loli-pop :P))
Joanne Washington chapter 4 . 2/5/2009
Hey! I love this story I'm absoloutly in love with it! Im so glad that they finally got togethor, well I'm hoping they are Lol XD I can't wait for your next chapter! Peace out :3
Kat The Great chapter 3 . 1/21/2009
what does it mean for a horse to be green? is it his coat color? cause that's kinda strange. anywho good chapter.

peace love happiness
LorriBetha chapter 3 . 1/20/2009
My firend has the nickname Squirt! we only call her it to annoy her though, but at least its better than mine (woofie!)! Another fantabulous chapter, I dont know why people aren't reviewing it, its great! but I suppose some of us have those days, im sure you'll get a lot mor,e but if you dont, ill always review! UPDATE again soon please, and I still love Nate!
LorriBetha chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
Just read these two chapters today, and I love it! It's such a cool story, I'm already in love with it. Nate seems really cool. I'm like ryan, and have a tough time getting along with rich kids, but I think in the future I might be able to stomach them, if I haven't murdered them by then of course. It's a really fantatsic story so far, so keep up the good work! UPDATE soon please?
sionzabby247 chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
im really lovin this. Keep it up.