|Reviews for with direction, we'd be runaways|
| cassi crysta chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
ahhhh. nice. split personalities...aren't we all one walking contradiction?
| Ohio-lovers chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Very interesting and thought-provoking.
I read it twice.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
the last line is perfect. it's got that punch that makes you think twice about it: sarcastic or not?
there's a hopelessness seeping through these words and that's how i like it.
| sylvia's syndrome chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
i like the atmosphere of vacancy and the sorrow that seems to be seeping in to fill the empty spaces. you've captured that feeling just before a storm- hushed, emptied, breathless. excellent as always.
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
i love the sweet little contradictions laced inside this piece.
the details really are captivating.
especially " precious set of nowhere children, orphans/of extinguished flames"
really cool thoughts and such.
| siphoned afterglow chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
to me, this is about life getting worn out, having nothing to do and living without purpose in some ways. i don't know. you might have a better explanation. still, i like this piece. its really lovely.