Reviews for i hold these black and white dreams |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nicely done. I got this clear visual of what was happening, which is always nice. I like the way "faces flawed white" rolls off the tongue; nice use of rhythm there. Lovely work. Keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting poem. I like this a lot. Well done. Write on! ~Anna~ _ |