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   no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 5/30/2008 Very nicely done. I got this clear visual of what was happening, which is always nice. I like the way "faces flawed white" rolls off the tongue; nice use of rhythm there. Lovely work. Keep writing! :) |
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 5/29/2008 Very interesting poem. I like this a lot. Well done. Write on! Anna _ |