Reviews for Locked Cages |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well its certainly an attention grabbing prologue you have here. But I wonder what New Yorkers would think if they read your story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow it took u sixteen chapters to get to the romance |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't think it was boring at all. I like you told us a lot, even though all dialogue. |
![]() ![]() nope, not boring! really liked it, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your story...i really like zenial and balon...i dont like so much ash though..pls update soon...:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter, i feel bad for Zenial. :( but like the story so update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter, update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really great chapter! I like how you described the city. I though Zenial's reaction to being leashed was really believable. Merry Chrismhannakwanza to you too :) |
![]() ![]() I'm in love! Please, Please, WRITE MORE! |
![]() ![]() nice chapter! more soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I'm glad that Zenial doesn't hate Balon quite as much as he did before. I wonder what is going on with Zenial and Ash. That should be interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice chapter. can't wait for more, i'm intersted in exactlly what Zenial plans on telling his parents in his letter. more soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol! he is not that curious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. I wonder how Zenial and Balon are going to get along? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, great story, can't wait for the next chapter! wonder who'll be the new pet? Zenial? oh well, i guess i'll have to wait and see! :) update soon! :) |