Reviews for Deception |
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![]() ![]() Hey! I’ve been re-reading this story for years now! I’m glad to see you’re back. |
![]() ![]() Awwww I really wish there was a way to message you please if by some luck you decide to go back to this story. Jusr know you have some faithful fans Dreamwriter33 just waiting for you |
![]() ![]() I'm guessing you are never going g to finish this story huh, what a shame. I was looking forward to seeing how you end it! |
![]() ![]() Ergh this girl is way to easy to persuade especially at the end |
![]() ![]() I see that this story has not been updated in almost 3 years, I hope all is well with you and yours. I still hope that you'll have a chance to finish it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WTH! Where is the rest of the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo dont go it was getting good! Ahhhh I love Felicia and Ethan in this story. Update soon. XD |
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![]() ![]() So she didn't want to sit next to the black old lady because she thought she would be too talkative be she befriend the old white lady who is doing the same exact thing she feared? |
![]() ![]() Use of possessive pronoun YOUR and YOU'RE were used interchangeably. You're is a short version of you are which is different from using possessive pronoun of your. "Hey if your not up to it" should have been "Hey if you're not up to it" |
![]() ![]() Please update soon! 1/17/13 |
![]() ![]() Prejudice raises its ugly head! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! so cool. |
![]() ![]() Hey, i've just read all of the chapters and i've gotta say, i'm. In love with it! Keep u the good work and update please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really good . . Please update soon ! |