Reviews for Shiny Glass Bottle
The Hippie Nerd chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
A really interesting rant, but a poetic rant- I liked it. There are some really great lines and wonderful imagery in some parts. I can't recall all my favourites...

"They slip inside and slide between your cheeks

Thrashing up against your fat"

"But f can only end in ucking

Like sh can only end in it" Humourous and relatable, quite liked that one!

"She's got her own sins tucked between her sheets

I've got my own lies licking at my knees" Very poetic.

A good poem overall, nice job!
Raistlin Majere chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I detect a lot of analogy, but that could just be superstition.

This is among my favorites of your most recent poems, and that's saying something; I don't pick favorites.

Excellent work.
the face in the window chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
"But f can only end in ucking

Like sh can only end in it"

that kind of sums my life up at some points.

good poem.
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 5/29/2008
Nice poem. Good message the last line really speaks volumes.