It was really good and interesting both chapters you can't help but hate the other character and it seems so different but constant... it was really good again the metaphor of the angel is beautiful... hm... yep...

It was really good and sad, the metaphor of the angel charm was beautiful...

WOW. That is really deep. Seriously, it's a great piece of prose which perfectly potrays the real human personality instead of the sterotyped bitch and the nice girl. I really love this. It will really help me in determining the behavivor of people in my story. It really is wonderful!

~Celtic

Deep. Very deep. I hope there is some sort of continuation for this! It's really good!