I know both of those songs!

I really love this story

I really like this. Joss and Nate's relationship is comfortable and the supporting cast (Joss's stepdad, her brother, the roommates) works well too. The tense took a while for me to get used to but I like it. Chapter 6 - "Nate is well-versed in the art of compromise" is actually my favorite.

The timeline is a little confusing sometimes (how long was Nate in DC and Joss in San Diego?) but I guess that's partially because of the short chapters, which I like though. Nate's desire for Joss to stay in San Diego so he could figure out how to live his own life seemed a bit abrupt...as is the introduction to Jeremy.

Please continue!

D I enjoyed this very much. Usually I'm the one who refuses to go in...and doesn't. Ever. ;D

I like it, it's funny

I love it, real sad with the incident though. But I love it.

Brilliant.

Sweet. Nate is so love sick.

Yay! You updated! Wow that was sad, but I hope things work out for Nate and Joss now.

I had to chuckle! Again, their friendship is so incredibly realistic!

This is absolutely wonderful, and I can't really say much more than that.

Haha XD I really liked this chapter. Good job :3 More puh-lease?

lol. I'd be annoyed too if I was Joss.

Update soon!

Хорошая часть, спасибо. Я хотела бы знать, есть ли у вас какой-то сюжет. Эти маленькие сцены хорошенкие, но мне кажется, что с сюжетом рассаз был бы лучше. Сейчас мы уже знаем, что они близки друг с другом. Хотела бы знать, если в коцне коцев, они изменятся, что-нибудь им произоидут? Понимаю, что ваш рассказ более психологический, что действие не самые важное; а мы уже знаем, что сюжету не надо быть так. Я сама предпочитаю такие психологические романы.

Ну вот.. Спасибо большое, и мне очень нравится ваш рассказ!

I just read the first chapter and I really like the dynamic between Joss and Nate so far. I like that he seems more mellow while she's more headstrong.

Writing wise, I like your diaglogue. Your language was fresh and natural. Grammatically, I'm not sure if I'm at liberty to say since I'm pretty awful at it but it seemed like there were some verb tense changes within the same sentence. You could be correct with me being wrong.

Nice, rather confusing with the Part Two. But Overall I loved it