Short but sweet. There's hope for them yet. :]

This has been the first story on fictionpress that's ever made me cry before. You're really a wonderful writer

WOW. This has to be my favorite chapter so far XD I really love this story. Joss's date getaway plan was hilarious.

Продолжайте, пожалуйста. Мне очень нравится ваш рассказ, особенно герои. В этом рассказе есть всё, что меня интересует и всё, что (по моему) важное- химия, дружба, действие, и смешной разговор между друзьями. Спасибо большое!

Again, sorry for the delay in reviewing! I really liked this chapter, as always! :) I absolutely adore the friendship Joss and Nate have... that doesn't need romance, but just... is amazing.

Weird chapter... but it's funny how Adam can't really talk to Joss, but I guess Nate and Joss are very good friends

Can't wait for the rest

Ok, they're not... just a glitch on my computer

Umm... chapters 17 and 19 are the same thing... I think...

This chapter is really funny, well, the previous ones are as well.

Still reading...

I quite like this story.

Can't wait to read the rest.

I've just discovered your story and I'm really enoying it. I love the characters you've created and the time jumps add an interesting dynamic to the story.

It's interesting to see how their relationship changes as they grow up.

Sorry it took me so long to review this update!

Again, vivid characters and intense storytelling all around.

Well done, looking forward to your next update.

I really like this. it's uber creative and you're a pretty decent writer. the only prob i'd say there is, is it's not in chronical order adn taht makes it a bit hard to follow. i have to keep going back to check the dates to see what's happening first and whether this has happened or not.

i get that it's part of the creativity, but it's a bit too difficult to keep switching chapters. not reader friendly. flashbacks would work and perhaps taht's what you're going for but this is too disorganized to give that effect. it might help if most ofthem are in order with just a few out of place.

please keep updating. and if you can change around the chapter orders. other than that keep it up!

Still really liking this story!

I like the alternating years of each chapter especially. It can be a bit confusing at times, but it makes it so much more interesting and really breaks it up!