Reviews for failure on broken wings
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
that was pretty and it made sense in an Alice in Wonderland sorta way.
Meihan chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
so deep, dark and kind of a hm...dnt knw what word im looking for but yeah! i like it though ) bc im sure at least once ppl should have felt this way before maybe maybe not, but nice poem