|Reviews for Imitation Illumination|
| wilko4523 chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
this is really good i love the imagery and the ending was certainly amusing lol-yes, why elope with light bulbs haahha
ive edited my thingie lol
i love the beauty of the poem as well and the contrast it makes with the rather creepy and harsh words-for example harsh, boiling, reacting, wired
| McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
God, that's beautiful. Sch beauty and harshness in one voice.
| iloveanimecartoons chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
AWESOME's a word I could use. Would it encompass all the feelings inspired from this piece, though? Heh. Doubt it. I really enjoyed your play on words that had a way of going in at least 3 ways at once while staying with a basic theme.
Out of my soul and onto the flames so they’ll grow
Higher and higher and soon I’m wired
With the newness of electric chemistry
Reacting inside of me
Blue and molten and boiling
Beneath my skin with a feverish glow
Crawling under my knuckles and knees
Playing my parts like piano keys
Yes, why elope with light bulbs
Though they’ll never leave
They’re such a waste of electricity
| SirScott chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
In one word beautiful.
| lymli chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
I just felt a lot of passion from this, the imageries were very mysterious and magical for some reason.
my favorite part is:
Because I gave my body over to the sun
And made love to its arms and legs
| the face in the window chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
wow. you've probably heard this a million time, but: you have such a gift. you really do.
| Tytherpol chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
"Impregnated with the expectations of noise"
the whole poem's really honest and well written. i really like it.