Reviews for 3AM
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
it's pretty.

i don't really like the first line-the question.

or really even the last stanza question

because i feel they really cheapen the rest of the piece

but the details included were charming

and the structure was overall effective

the second stanza seemed a little over yoda-like, and i'm not sure if that was really necessary

but the scene painted is pleasant
Isca chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Beautiful imagery!