|Reviews for 4:28|
| RiBow chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
This was a very rare poem, and I'm glad I happened to stumble upon it. Well, first of all, the title captured me instantly; very interesting and unique. I loved the last lines; it's like you were arguing with your bed whether to stay up or not.
| CigaretteBurn chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
So awesome. I love that you documented the time because I was instantly drawn in to hear your delusions while being so tired but refusing to sleep.
Great Job ) !
| Isca chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
A unique poem. Keep up the good work, Kikyuu!
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 5/31/2008
Interesting poem. Well, that's not the right word. Relatable I think. That's a place we've all been before, especially in the last two lines. The only thing I didn't like about this poem was the repetition of "head" in the second stanza. I'm sort of a snob about repetition and how it's used though. Good job.