Reviews for When It All Falls Apart
Sakurachibi08 chapter 19 . 2/25/2011
Is Lindsey like with Brandon in part 2 or something?
Sakurachibi08 chapter 14 . 2/25/2011
Oh gawd, did Jack do something? Is he like not gonna come?
LateNightTurtle chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
oh u mentioned Alesana! they're my favorite band! :D
cratermaker chapter 19 . 4/4/2010
I literally cried out "What? To be continued? WHAT?" when I saw that. TTwTT I must see what happens... This can't be it... -cries- I'm going to go check your page, and if the sequel is not there, I'm putting you on my hit list. Along with my alert list.
gabbyweasley62195 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
that was really good. there were alot of mistakes with spelling and such but that fine we're all human. i really liked it. i just finished it and i want to cry but my big brother is in the room so i can't. '(
Miss. Neptune Heart chapter 19 . 6/12/2009
Oh wow, I read for 2 hours straight! I completely l-o-v-e the story! It's fantastic althought at first, I thought Jack and Lindsey's relationship started a bit too fast.

It was well progressed though and the plot was very typical in a good way. I'm off the read the sequel now!

Oh and is the ending based off of the song 'When It All Falls Apart' by The Veronicas? :]

Great job with the story!

Luci Penchant chapter 19 . 5/22/2009
Oh my gosh! That was so amazing! I feel soo bad for Lindsey! I can't wait to start reading your sequel! yay! excited! :)
Luci Penchant chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
That was really awesome!
XxDragon-TwinsxX chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
This story was awesome.

After finishing this one..

i was so shocked of the ending..

and i wanted more..

but then i heard there was a sequel..

i almost cried..

Love you stories..

please update the sequel soon.
Destiny1406 chapter 17 . 12/16/2008
I want you to write a lot more! please keep writing. I am highly anticipating more of your awesome story.
Jordyanne chapter 17 . 12/6/2008
i love your story) hurry and add more to your story!
teardropsONroses chapter 15 . 9/23/2008

this is so cute!

i LOVE it!
InkyHeart chapter 15 . 9/22/2008
Well That was unexpected.



Anywayz pretty good!
UnicornSlayer chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
this story is cool :D, i hav a few questions and comments first of all my name is lindsey too! with an E even! and secondly i love chiodos! and is this story about you? or is it jus a daydream or wat? nyways its awesome :D
teardropsONroses chapter 14 . 9/16/2008

okay that chapter was really good,

but what happened next?

write more soonisk!
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