Is Lindsey like with Brandon in part 2 or something?

Oh gawd, did Jack do something? Is he like not gonna come?

oh u mentioned Alesana! they're my favorite band! :D

I literally cried out "What? To be continued? WHAT?" when I saw that. TTwTT I must see what happens... This can't be it... -cries- I'm going to go check your page, and if the sequel is not there, I'm putting you on my hit list. Along with my alert list.

that was really good. there were alot of mistakes with spelling and such but that fine we're all human. i really liked it. i just finished it and i want to cry but my big brother is in the room so i can't. '(

Oh wow, I read for 2 hours straight! I completely l-o-v-e the story! It's fantastic althought at first, I thought Jack and Lindsey's relationship started a bit too fast.

It was well progressed though and the plot was very typical in a good way. I'm off the read the sequel now!

Oh and is the ending based off of the song 'When It All Falls Apart' by The Veronicas? :]

Great job with the story!

-Spazzlex

Oh my gosh! That was so amazing! I feel soo bad for Lindsey! I can't wait to start reading your sequel! yay! excited! :)

That was really awesome!

This story was awesome.

After finishing this one..

i was so shocked of the ending..

and i wanted more..

but then i heard there was a sequel..

i almost cried..

Love you stories..

please update the sequel soon.

I want you to write a lot more! please keep writing. I am highly anticipating more of your awesome story.

i love your story) hurry and add more to your story!

oh

this is so cute!

i LOVE it!

Well That was unexpected.

Fifteen?

Woah.

Anywayz pretty good!

this story is cool :D, i hav a few questions and comments first of all my name is lindsey too! with an E even! and secondly i love chiodos! and is this story about you? or is it jus a daydream or wat? nyways its awesome :D

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okay that chapter was really good,

but what happened next?

write more soonisk!